Chapter 57: Borrowed Ground, Borrowed Temper - 57

Chapter 57: Borrowed Ground, Borrowed Temper - 57

Yep — I’ll rewrite Chapter 57 so it flows cleanly from Chapter 56 (Iris misunderstanding cleared, Juliet "settlement," Iris claiming dinner), fix grammar, keep NovelFire pacing, and remove/replace anything too sexual .

Your draft has explicit sexual content (touching chest, "felt them," etc.) and also ramps into violence. I’ll keep the comedy jealousy and Yuren’s "spar to vent" energy, but make it PG-13 : no explicit details, no threats of death, and the kiss will be referenced non-explicitly .

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